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Afton, your listening is beautiful! The words you choose to type, what you feel to type, is intricate and multidimensional. This poem is an invitation to revisit again and again, as its questions create space for the heart. Thank you for writing and sharing!!

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"would we be freeing ourselves

by letting go of our SELVES?

we’d have identity

of what we know

and what we’ve learned

but not the burden

of the world."

Mic drop... I have no words. :)

Afton, this just became my new favorite poem of yours. It's so awesome to see you go so deep into such a topic. So happy to be apart of witnessing your writing journey blossom.

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