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diane witters's avatar

“I hope that I have left a little trace

And I hope you’ve found a place

In this world, wherever it may be

And that you love yourself, and everything you see

That you have come far, but you still remember me.”

This part especially speaks to me. I think you can rest assured that the strong-gentle-wise-compassionate Afton of today is leaving more than a little trace — on her future self and on all who get to witness her care and creative presence.

I also like that you’re reminding your future self to love unique you.

We all need this reminder — to quiet the inner critic and, at each unfolding chapter of our lives, to value our own essence. 💛

Ellen Beeler's avatar

Hi Afton, I cherish each line of this poem. Writing a letter to "future me". or "past me" is a great prompt for all of us. These lines especially: "Have you gotten wiser With each sunrise or Did you slip back under the covers So the cold wouldn’t drag you under." Would you mind if I shared this on my Facebook page or restacked it?

Afton P. Wilder's avatar

The letters are definitely a great prompt! And I would be so happy if you restacked or shared this poem!! Thank you ☺️

Cherie Gans's avatar

I'm mopping up the tears... you are so honest and understanding, Afton.

Thank you,

Gram

Stephanie Nash's avatar

Oh, this is just so marvelous! You are so mature beyond your years, Afton. And, yes, I totally understood without the explanation - the resonance of your poetry is just lovely. Thank you.

kiran ladwa's avatar

Wow! I loved the sincerity, enthusiasm, hope and curiosity that’s filled in the poem. Thank you for your beautiful words